Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 9, 2021
All about bees
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Hi Anya Ben Here.
ReplyDeleteThis Is A Really Cool Blog Post. I Like The Way You You Put A Image In The Background. Maybe Next Time You Could Put An Image Related To Bees.
I Noticed A Lack Of Capital Letters And Full Stops So Maybe You Could Work On That. Overall Great Post Anya Blog Ya Later!
Hi Ben thanks for your opinion I will work on my full stops in capital letters thanks. byeee
DeleteHey Anya,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good informal slide. I like the end bit about how bees might have corona-virus.Maybe next time you could do a poster or maybe a bitable video. Next time you should check your spelling. I remember doing informative writing about animals.
Bye.
Hi Anya,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very cool slide I really liked looking through your slide on bees.
The jokes were funny. The only other thing I have to say is to maybe make it a bit longer but it was so very good. From Amy.